The Diplomacy of the Knife (Four of Mercies #2), by C.M. Caplan

21 Feb 2025

The Book

The Diplomacy of the Knife
Series: Four of Mercies
Pages: 474
Age Group: Adult
Published on 20 Feb 2025
Publisher: Self-published
Genres:
Science-fantasy

Synopsis:

Petre Mercy’s had a rough time since he rode home on a cyborg horse. He’s lost a hand that’s been replaced with a mess of steel and piano string, broke his thyroid-powered sword, and helped ignite a civil war that’s engulfed the countryside.

His sister, The Queen, has ordered him to root out any traitors in Mercy House. But Petre can hardly ferret out the truth from his siblings, let alone a vast network of spies with counterplots. And every day more turncoats move against him.

If he has any hope of putting down this uprising, he’ll have to work with a sister he’s still learning to trust. But his enemies are one step ahead of him at all times. And they’re hiding in the last place he’d think to look.  

My Review

The Diplomacy of the Knife is the second novel in the science fantasy series Four of Mercies, written by C.M. Caplan. Equally crazy and imaginative as the first instalment, we will become spectators of the civil war that has started across the country, with a Petre that will have to proof his value to his sister, the Queen, and find traitors that root in the Mercy house; an instalment that puts a bit more of the focus on the complex politics of this world without losing that unique touch that Caplan writing gives.

From the start of the novel, we are again into the chaotic mess that is Petre's head; the same unique voice that, however, starts to gain agency in comparison with the previous book: now in a complex position under the orders of his sister, we see how Petre refuses to continue being the pawn in a bigger game and starts taking some decisions by itself. He's still an outsider in this world of scheming and subterfuge, but with much effort to become what they expect from him, we have an excellent character development; mistakes will happen, but even in a world he doesn't really fully grasp, he's trying to get his own way.

The first book was truly imaginative and inventive, but maybe with a plot that sometimes could be felt a little off; in comparison, The Diplomacy of the Knife is much better tied, mixing political intrigue, backstabbing and intense action scenes. The pacing is a bit slower, but it only plays in favour of the novel, which takes the opportunity to improve in aspects such as characterization (and I can't stop thinking about how brilliantly written is Petre's mother).

The worldbuilding is equally brilliant and crazy; if already we have truly crazy inventions such as the cyborg horses and how Petre's hand was repaired, Caplan decides to take it to a new level, but somehow, all makes sense. The writing is sharp and agile, partly suiting well to Petre's mind, and honestly, just embrace the chaos, because it's fricking amazing.

The Diplomacy of the Knife is an excellent second instalment, as it takes all from The Fall Is All There and takes it to an all new level; Four of Mercies is the series you want to read if you like inventive worldbuilding, incredible characters and a great amount of chaos. Well done, Connor!

The Author/s

C.M. Caplan

C.M. Caplan

C.M. Caplan is the author of the SPFBO7 semi-finalist The Sword in the Street, and the post-apocalyptic science-fantasy The Fall Is All There Is. He’s a quadruplet (yes, really), autistic, and has a degree in creative writing. He was awarded his university's highest honor in the arts for his work. His short fiction also won an Honorable Mention in the 2019 Writers of the Future Contest. If you enjoy his books, you can rate them on Goodreads and Amazon.